Friday, May 20, 2011

Last persuasive paper

Nate Lewis
Mr. Allam
English II
20 May 2011
I believe that I have done a pretty good job this year in English class. I’ve come a long way from the first quarter especially in my writing. Since I’ve done a pretty good job I think the grade that I deserve is an "A." I deserve this because I try my hardest, and I have progressed quite a bit. That is why I deserve an "A" in this class.
I may talk a lot in class. However when I'm talking it's actually about what we are discussing in class. I may argue at times.
I try my hardest on my work. Whenever we have assignments I always spend time on doing them. My blogs have all been done. Every blog I have done has been turned in on time. My blogs and papers were done by and often before they the due date. This shows that I truly try my hardest on my work. I make the effort to have it done well and on time.
I also have progressed quite a bit in my writing. Not only have I progressed this semester, but over the whole year. I have progressed in my quality when writing. Now when I write I use actually substance to fill my paper. As where before I just filled my paper with mindless drivel. This is one of the many reasons I deserve this grade.
            These are a few of the reasons I think I deserve an “A” for this class. I’ve progressed lots in this class and I always have tried my hardest on all my work. Everything has been done on time.
               

Wednesday, May 11, 2011

Villanelle

If I could i certainly would do it
Fill in in text just to blow off the dome
I'm a clutch you know that I've won that hit

I stick these lines I know how to spit it
Someday I'll have a place to call my home
If I could I certainly would do it

Throw out the rhymes and throw myself a fit
Someplace far away I'll call it my Rome
I'm a clutch you know that I've won that hit

Scoop it up and drop it from my own mit
My letters glint off so hot like some chrome
If I could I certainly would do it

Fill my life with these signs I just wanna sit
Wipe it out like it's some dirt off the comb
I'm a clutch you know that I've won that hit

Roaming out like a case of addition bit
I still wish to call the moon my own home
If I could I certainly would do it
I'm a clutch you know I've won that hit

Wednesday, May 4, 2011

Sonnet

I would save you whenever you need me there
I know I'm not that strong but i just might,
jump in for you the one i know does care,
I really think your crazy outta sight.

some say I might be quite the little bore,
I want to look across the room and say,
trust me somehow, I'm not just out to score,
How did it all start out with just a hey,

You try and see it through these worn and torn,
You should try and touch these bright blue skies
You don't see me adorned with a sick horn,
Lullabies only keep us up on highs,

Throw the two three down all for one to four
These words they just leave you wanting more.