Persuasive Letter

Nate Lewis

11812 S. Cherry Lane

Olathe, KS 66061

March 31, 2011

Dave and Pegge Lewis

11812 S. Cherry Lane

Olathe, KS 66061

Dear Mom and Dad,

           

Beaches, forests, camping, the outdoors! We should move to California. This would be much more fun than Kansas. Think about all the good things that could happen. We should move to California because Kansas is so boring, and there is tons of great scenery in California.

            There are some advantages and disadvantages to moving there. There could be more life changing situations there, but this would introduce the real world to me.  If Dad couldn’t find a job we could all get smaller jobs. This would only be temporary until he can find a long term job.

Kansas isn’t very fun and gets boring pretty easily. The big cities in California would give us lots of opportunities for entertainment. We could do things like go to the cities and see sports games.  With all these things to do how could we get bored? The city just gives us so many opportunities to enjoy. I think this could make the next few years much more enjoyable. All this would be make me so happy.

            A huge reason is the scenery there. The beaches would be so fun to visit. While at the beaches we could swim. If we didn’t want to swim then we could just play on the beach. There is also all the forest areas in the north. We could go camp there for our vacations. This would be a great way to spend our time.

There are plenty of things that California has to offer. This could keep us away from the boredom of Kansas, and let us see great scenery.  These are the reasons why we should move away from Kansas to California.

Sincerely,

Nate Lewis